User blog comment:Gliscor Fan/Epic Rap Battles of History, ERB wiki edition/@comment-9623756-20150202180313/@comment-26209006-20150202185959

Gonna be honest.

1. It sounds like you're going into a british Swartzeneggar at points and it's kind of distracting from the portrayal.

2. A bit of editing might be able to clear up the longer pauses.

3. There was nothing wrong with this one, but there's a lot of puffs and other things up with the mic you have.