User blog comment:0ShadowStories/ERBIdeas S5 - Eminem VS Johnny Cash/@comment-26843707-20150912025838

Not bad. I would have liked to see more referneces on Johnny Cash. For instance a diss that could be made towards him was that he was once arrested for picking flowers from someone's garden. You could have had:

I'm the monster Dre made me, now I'm the man of the hour,

While you're pathetic pansy who got arrested for picking flowers.

Or something like that. But this is just a suggestion. Still had a good flow and some clever lines.