User blog comment:Howtobeme/Slenderman vs Count Dracula/@comment-15589301-20150308171916

Not bad, but there were some very dodgie lines such as:

"Dracula I'll impale a stake to your heart and clip off your wings

Giving nightmares faster than pizza, can't mess with Freddy, Foxy, Chica, and Bonnie"

and

"You have less outdoor time than Freddy Fazbear

Beware because my presecence is everywhere"

imo, these lines especially could use some work, however like I said not bad, and I'm sure you will improve. Good job :D