User blog comment:Dragonsblood23/Project: The Wizard of Cube (Alice VS Dorothy/Wizard of Oz Storyline)/@comment-5482968-20150914230610

Honestly, some of this is pretty good. Your grammar physically hurts me, though, and some of the character choices feel like you just chose them out of personal bias, and if this is supposed to be like how ERB could do it, then that sort of bias should be ignored. Overall, like I said, honestly decent. Biggest complaint would have to be Sandler not rhyming though. Ew.