User blog comment:Darwinistotallyrad/An attempt at a rap battle thing./@comment-15589301-20160709212148/@comment-27286780-20160709215515

To be fair, I gave reasons why I thought it was bad. Your right about the critism part tho. So here's some critism for the battle:

1. formatting needs work.

2. the flow needs work.

3. try to avoid generic lines.

4. try to work on finishing lines.