User blog comment:IGLYMCLXXRZKIMENCTVOJOSQIZBCBNOVSNRQQIQHBUYGENATZS/Charles Darwin vs Ash Ketchum (fan made and not a real battle made by epic rap battles of history on youtbe now or ever)/@comment-26261279-20140404104522

(Since my computer's being an assclown and not allowing me to reply to your comment, thus making one of the things I typed hypocritical, I'll just post it here)

Firstly, please use the reply button.

Second, it's mainly your rhyming. A lot of the rhymes seem really random and sex related. That can be okay once or twice, but when overused it becomes disturbing and bland. Also maybe tone down your swearing a little. Do all of these and I'd say you've got potential to be good, though.