User blog comment:Epicnail/Random Rap Battles Of Randomness S2- Katniss Everdeen vs. Ash Ketchum/@comment-24993461-20140614040054

This battle is good, but needs polish. "Those bows and arrows that you've got will get shot down by my Oshawott!" Bows don't fly, and therefore cannot get shot down. Also, bow should be singular, since when do you have more than one bow? You make the same mistake in Katniss's second verse. The second verses of both battlers seem lazy. You did a great job with the references in the first part of the battle, so I don't get why you appeared to give up. That "ready the cannon" line was really good, though.

If you fixed the second verses, this battle would be quite good. Also, proof-read your battles. By ERB standards, this gets about a 5.75/10. Fix the second verses and the rating would probably improve.