User blog comment:FrankieRapBattles/Teen Titans vs. Super Readers/@comment-108.18.115.103-20150227005341/@comment-25597727-20150227010926

We get that. We have the right to an opinion. Some constructive Criticism:

You need to read up on your rappers way more. You are forcefully trying to rhyme things when it straight up makes zero sense (i.e

"Yo the beast in the house

Come harder than Mickey Mouse ")

That doesn't make any sense. Second, the flow is nonexistent. At some moments it'll be long, and at others it'll be short. You need to spend waaaaay longer writing the lyrics. Unless, you are lyrically genius, this should take you a couple weeks at least. Keep working at it. You'll get better