User blog comment:Icey778/Rap Battles of Excellence Redux 14: Lizzie Borden vs Mary Tudor/@comment-9623756-20161019161230

Time for the standard Joe review!

So, once again, I thought your flow was on point throughout the battle. Its the one thing that I think you do consistently well with, and its something that I don't usually find elsewhere in other battles, so kudos to you for that.

Another thing similar to other battles, however, is more negative. Your tendency to use ending lines that don't really relate to either rapper, and don't sound like words they would be using like Mary saying magazine or such and such. This would be forgiveable in most circumstances, but coupled with some dodgy syntax throughout the battle it makes it quite jarring.

I also feel yu could have delved more into Mary but heyho.