User blog comment:Joeaikman/Joe's Rap Battles of Fiction Season 4 Episode 5 - Buffy Summers vs Ash Williams/@comment-24322797-20161207004013

okay i read it now

this was pretty good

ash's second and third verse were a hell of a lot better than his first and buffy was pretty consistent. id say ash's second and third were better than buffy's so ill call it a tie overall

one thing i've noted with a lot of your writings, namely scissorhands and that one yugi-oh battle, is you tend to add either no cameos to a battle of a large amount of them. cameos can be fun but they're sorta annoying when you have too many and i feel like three is excessive, especially when two were in the same four-line verse, but that's a to each their own sorta deal

either way im glad you're still writing