User blog comment:AdirTheSnail/Francisco Franco vs Pancho Villa/@comment-38804946-20190529011156

I think this is a great start to making rap battles. The research appears to be very thorough and I love the historical matchup. I will make a few suggestions. I think the verses could be a little longer and maybe spend a little more time establishing your lines by adding some filler words just to make them sound more complete. I also think that you should try to establish a rhythm and continue it throughout the battle as it seemed that several lines were too short. Also, if you ever find any instrumental that would fit the theme of this battle, you could work around that as well. I did something similar in one of my more recent battles that I made. If you check out my battle Columbo vs. Magnum P.I., I have a beat that I found that I worked around and for the most part my lyrics follow that rhythm. Overall, I think this is a great battle. Obviously there's improvements that need to be made as nothing is perfect. But I say keep up with the thorough research and maybe look at the lyrics of other historically based battles that other fans have made on here and draw from that. Good luck!