User blog comment:JakeTheManiac/Fourth Official Wiki Rap Tournament Round 1: TKandMit vs JakeTheManiac/@comment-25263388-20150704053447

Due to some stuff that got pointed out to me by Jake/TK and Hip-Hop

I'd like to change my vote.

Jake. His flow was indeed better, despite TK having improved it vastly in the last verse, and the Glen and Glenda comparison was good now that I understand it. I tried rapping it as I read it, and this had some substantial impact.

Some criticism to Jake: Dig deep. Look at TK. Diss him on more than the previous tourney and where he lives. Glen and Glenda was good, the first tourney was GREAT, but otherwise nothing actually insulted TK. He never represented Michigan/Detroit in any way I know of, thus he hasn't really failed it unless you are some form of extreme patriot. You must say HOW he failed Detroit. The Insane Clown Posse line was somewhat meh. They are only slightly referrable to him, and not that bad a rapping artist, unlike, say Young Thug or something. IMO reference to some form of TK-O would have been good as well.

Some criticism to TK: FLOW. This is something that was dealt some detriment through your intelligent use of grammar and sentencing which was smart and good but for that damage to the flow. Jake probably had some more disses. I would have referenced the wrestler Boogeyman and Johnny the Homicidal Maniac, as well as his name-change. His uncreative ERB-sourced avatars also merit a shot.