Talk:Upcoming ERB suggestions/@comment-24.176.24.33-20120808001941/@comment-4328703-20120808002847

i think you had too many words that didn't rhyme in there, and too many pairs of rhymes that you had to speed up on to equalize itself with its predisessor verse. But on a good note, you had a really good basis for your rhymes, the matchup made sense and the insults were nice. In all i think you had a good flow, that needed to be touched up on a bit, but other than that, great!