User blog comment:DennisRocking/SCRAPPED DRB: Dr. Jekkyl VS Dr. Frankenstein/@comment-24322797-20161031192933

a couple things regarding formatting

you need to cool it with exclamation marks. one gets the job done, more than three is excessive lol. also, all caps-locks verses is a cool effect for certain characters, but i dont think it works for hyde as he was vile, sure, but he was sophisticated as well

other than that, you beat yourself up over this one but it's actually pretty good. life/life was a thing and it was bad, but other than that, this was pretty good all things considered