User blog comment:Iamthelegion/Hannibal Lecter vs Norman Bates - Alternate Rap Battles of Fiction Season 1/@comment-24993461-20150308063046

This wasn't great. The battle was boring to read, honestly. You should work on disses and punchlines. Some of the rhyme choices felt unnatural to me. You should also rhyme more than just in the end of each line.