User blog:S0UND3FX69/A serious question

Hello once again fellow members of the ERBoH Wiki. As you can see in the title of the blog I am asking a SERIOUS question. So the question is what else can I do to improve my rapping? This is my latest example of a rap battle that I put a good amount of time & effort to make. http://rap-battle-nation.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:S0UND3FX69/Agent_47_vs._Niko_Bellic I make raps with what I think are my best rhymes yet, I give descriptions of why the characters are rap battling on the actual page for the series Epic Sounding Battles of History, & I even do full-fledged rap meanings & I am wondering if there is  still way more room to improve or what. Also I know that I might have been bad at listening to constructive criticism in the past..., but I do not know if you can tell by the looks of it, but my goal is to make them as best as possible for you guys (the fans) so I look forward to what all of you have to say. Cheers. :D

How much more room is there to improve? No more room Barely any room Some room A good amount of room A huge amount of room A ton of room to improve