Talk:Epic Rap Battles of History 62/@comment-173.76.200.203-20160604214018/@comment-7464192-20160604220916

For one, it's "critique". Now on to the actual verse. Lots of filler. There's some lines that seem like references that seem very convoluted if I'm understanding the references right. I like some of the rhyme schemes you used, it makes it flow decently. GoT reference was a bit convoluted and uncalled for. Adieu is French, not British. There's not really the best punchlines but a couple true truths being brought up. Also when you say "crack quips" and don't follow with a "crack whips" for Whiplash I cry. In general it's decent but it could've been done much better. Nice though