User blog comment:Bobdave/My Housemates - For the Poetry Slam/@comment-3401602-20151022202637

Damn this is interesting.

I take this as a form of a relationship abuse poem, which is a very unique topic to write a poem about, it seems. I like the repition and the simplicity, and definitely the conclusion.

I'll give this a 8.5/10. While I like shorter poems more, this seem to escalate oddly quickly and sort of abrupt. Regardless, I still find it quite enjoyable.