User blog comment:Dark Cyan/Dark Cyan vs The voice of the voiceless. The Fifth Official Wiki Rap Tournament - Round One/@comment-5412428-20160727004944

Aight

I didn't really like this

Let's get into the verse structure and maybe I can figure out who won

Cyan's First Verse:

Amazing first bar. Set my hopes very high. A decent go to set the difference between the two of you in the third line followed by a rather mediocre rhyme scheme, ending with the punchline of calling Voice an upstart. There was a cool build up to a rather weak diss. The follow bar was clever, but that's about it. It wasn't hard, a limp diss overall. But still, very clever. Alright this final bar was aight, calling his battles shit, ending with a fun material laced threat. Overall, a good but dry verse, but I personally expected a lot more from such a talented writer.

Voice's First Verse:

This was a very inferior verse to Cyan's in terms of dissing and research, but far superior in terms of flavor and Voice's inner...uh...voice. While Voice called Cyan out for taking his best lines from wrestling, which was very true, Voice also stole his best lines from wrestling. So like...well then. The Arby's line I don't think had any relation to either of rappers unless Voice was referring to his own diet. Which, like the line, is bad. I prefer Voice's verse at this point because it's more memorable to me, but I'm not fond of it honestly.

Cyan's Second Verse:

Aight the first line was just really....unoriginal I suppose? I really didn't like, the material and disses seemed REALLY obvious and a tad hamfisted. Alright what the fuck is taint hair. I legitmately do not know what Cyan was referring to with this line so I'm just going to ignore it a tad. Also the fact Cyan's telling a 14 year old boy (something he established earlier) that he knows he masturbates is really disturbing. Alright third line. Decent finisher. Still expected more from such an experienced and ass kicker of a writer.

Voice's Second Verse:

A fun, laughable, necessary GIR diss, but like Cyan's opener, fairly unoriginal if you're going to diss Cyan on his friendship with GIR. Also there's a whole minefield on GIR disses you could turn against Cyan yet Voice chose to use whining? Ehh. With the second line, why wouldn't Voice want Cyan to understand (dechiper) his lines? Oh my fuck the amount of wrestling lines in this battle. Voice and Cyan both have a lot of information yet it's substituted with wrestling?? This is ridiculous. Aight who is Phil Brooks and why should I care if Cyan quits like him. At this point I'm so tired of wrestling lines I just can't care anymore.

My Vote: Voice. I expected a lot more from Cyan and Voice was more memorable despite the lackluster lines.