User blog comment:LawnDefender072003/Ban Ki-moon vs. Kim Jong-un/@comment-31857282-20170513150315

some of these lines, like unacceptable/evil, don't really rhyme

some of them are two lines that feel like one line (how powerful I am/US with my hand) in how they flow

characterization was done at the expense of character interplay and at some points, good disses/comparisons

this is still early battles for you, and it definitely feels that way. i think your last one was better in some ways, worse in others

have you considered listening to some rappers (Eminem, Kanye, NWA, Wu Tang, EpicLLOYD, Zach Sherwin, etc.) to get a better understanding of how rap works so it feels less like talking? gotta get that W O R D P L A Y bakugou my boy