User blog comment:Joshuakrasinski/Dr.cube Vs Master mayhem Ft,uchu chu/@comment-27039431-20180803193007

I can see you had fun doing this battle and all but it doesn't save you from being the next unironic Sega. You can easily create a fun battle that is well written and yours is far from that. If you want to see some fun, non-serious, but still really well written and hard-hitting battles, check up on [], he is amazing. For the small things, make your battles more appeasing for the eye - proofread and correct mistakes, use capital letters. I hope you get better.