User blog comment:Howtobeme/Queen Elsa vs Katniss Everdeen/@comment-24993461-20150319041242

It wasn't terrible.

You should work on turning your material into disses.

"While the camera work on your movies is just a mess"

"Always being saved by Finnick and Rue, what an epic fail!"

"in my series I'm at least the protagonist"

This is good material, but simply stating doesn't make a battle great. The first example I gave could be changed to "Your raps are shaky like your camera work" or "So cold I make your cameraman shiver". My examples could be worded better but hopefully you get my point.

Another thing, it seems like you forced a couple rhymes, such as Gale/fail, later/dater, filler/killer, antagonist/protagonist. If you can't think of anything to rhyme with a certain line, then use a word that doesn't rhyme as well instead, such as lifesaver/respirator from Hitler vs. Vader 2. If you don't like that idea, then try to reword the line so it ends on a different word.