User blog comment:Istilldontknow/Edwin Hubble vs. Alexander Oparin/@comment-4920659-20170125010354

The battle was good for a first time, but it starts being less interesting later on from the length. Since neither of them are really that much known, you could probably cut out several of the lines since they were kind of filler. At points the flow was off, but it was actually done well for the most part.