User blog comment:Joeaikman/Joeaikman vs DudeWithASuit - Tourney Battle/@comment-3401602-20180716203406

Nice. DWAS won.

inb4 "Can you not possibly expand on this?" ok DAD i will

First verse, DWAS had creative jokes woven into his lines like mentioning how he, represented in a suit, has class while remarking how a communist doesn't know anything about class. Pretty fun line with a double entendre. One thing in DWAS's first verse I didn't like was spending two lines just calling Joe ugly (though "Dave Grohl cave troll" made me laugh my ass off).

Other than already stating how DWAS sucked up to Coupe, what the hell is "Doctor who the fuck are you dude". Like damn I think you're stretching a bit on the Coupe-was-a-Whovian thing, especially mentioning it three lines after mentioning Coupe the first time.

Calling Joe beating Dragon a participation ribbon was fucking awesome lmao.

One thing in Joe's last verse I found pretty funny and creative was "your love for chorus kids saw this Catholic put on a register" but that's pretty much the only thing that impressed me. Joe mentioning getting an advantage if his opponent gets blocked is an odd remark to make, considering Joe himself has been banned and blocked many times due to crass behavior while it was a user choice by DWAS to disable his account. So that line doesn't work at all, since DWAS never did anything bad. I think a better line would be chastising DWAS for leaving and inviting him to run away again.

I noticed a nice amount of inner rhyming in DWAS's second verse as well with "misconstrued / pitied you / shit amus- / since you're used / improve-". Overall impressive technical work in my opinion.

I was hoping Joe would do better here because I've wanted to battle him in a tourney for years, but I definitely think that he lost here. Good job though.