User blog comment:BeautyAndTheBestiality/John F. Kennedy vs Princess Diana. Epic Rap Battles of History Season 1/@comment-3401602-20170221010842

Hey hey, I really liked this battle. Your writing really works well and is pretty consistent throughout all of the verses. I think my only gripe is that some lines seem to be a syllable or two off from a line before and would mess up any rhythm,  but seeing as there is no beat, that can just be chalked up to how I'm rapping it. I would suggest finding beats for raps too, those generally guide the viewer when they read battles, and in my personal opinion I just really find rapping to beats entertaining.

Another thing that I want to point out is that it seems like a whole lot of lines focused on JFK's assassination, and while it's one of the most memorable events about that President, I think it just happened to be a tad overdone:

"But my death shocked the world! Even Castro wept!", "And they'll be splattered in blood like Jackie Onassis!", "Whose assassination is "believed to still be a mystery." / I mean it's been 50 years! Why's it still a conspiracy? / Your term lasted only 2 years!", "You splatter on her in the car and she tries to get away! / You should lead by the heart! Instead of your head! / But I just remembered they're both why you're dead.", "Like Oswald, you gotta aim for a claim to fame!", "This was an assassination and you just got slain!" are all lines that mention the assassination but don't really add much to the battle after it's originally stated.

Though, that's not to say a good amount of them were not creative. I really dig the "I solemnly swear to kick the Kennedy's own asses, / And they'll be splattered in blood like Jackie Onassis!" and "Whose assassination is "believed to still be a mystery." / I mean it's been 50 years! Why's it still a conspiracy?" couplets in Diana's first verse. Really good stuff.

Oh and I know I've heard it before somewhere, but how are JFK and 50 Cent alike?

Diana crushed Kennedy, imo. Good job -- your writing's pretty consistent, I'd just work a little bit on flow and try not to be repetitive. Lots of potential. :)