Thread:ElvisGoopBuysDogsForever/@comment-25263388-20170214125804/@comment-25263388-20170214163140

here is my finalized first verse

Amon:

Time to be lethal, break apart your character like the prequels

When I destroy the force, what will you and I be? Equal.

I'll still be your better, boil blood in that tin sweater

How do you maintain mobility in half a tonne of leather?

It's a shame that I can't one-up your wife's kid-bearing tragedy

So though I represent non-benders, I'll still warp your reality

You stole Deadpool's face, that looks like it went through a blender

Took disarming literally, your intricacies as real as that firebender

And I'm the number one! I'll dispose of another Lieutenant

Shocking, really. Betrayal all the more bitter when a friend did it.

Depose your decrepit master of his throne like I did my Tarlokk

Next to the Avatar, you are nothing. True power turns others' off.

The best thing? I can replicate your iconic Force Choke trick.

Feel the pressure of a car in your cartoids and see how it hits.