Talk:Epic Rap Battles of History 46/@comment-7367734-20141014210920

Hey guys, writing a rap, Atticus Finch vs Phoenix Wright, and wanted some feedback on Atticus' first verse;

"Atticus Finch here, the top notch Ace Attorney,

And I'm about to clip the wings of this defenseless little birdie,

You call yourself a man of law, presenting fake evidence?

My methods are filled with elegance and my raps are twice as venomous!

I'm the saviour of Maycomb, you're just a spiky-haired yahoo,

I'm stopping prejudice in this town, while you haven't got a clue,

About defending your clients, you stand there in a suit of blue,

Trynna bluff your way through the trial, just like you always do!

It's a sin to kill a Mockingbird, but you I must dispatch,

I'll leave you dead in a hole in a tree as a lonely pile of firey ash!"