User blog comment:JKGame/Scout vs Robert Baden-Powell: Epic Rap Battles of the Universe/@comment-9623756-20181111213131

Okay so just a few notes. I really liked the concept of this battle. I don't read many fabmades but this pulled me in because I really liked the connection and idea of the matchup.

I thought the battle was written adequately. It wasn't terrible but equally there was no moment that I was like oh snap. The disses towards Baden Powell felt quite shallow, and any references to scouting itself fell into a similar category. Not much hidden meaning behind them.

It flowed aight. A few instances where it felt like there was too many syllables but other than those it was tight. Better than lots of battles written by other people.

Good job.