User blog comment:DennisRocking/Dennis' Rap Battles: Beethoven VS Tchaikovsky/@comment-31857282-20171106135916/@comment-31857282-20171111154621

how is offering a reasonable alternative offering no criticism

what further would you suggest

i read your battles because A) the wiki's dead B) they're generally decent but they have multiple manifestly stupid lines that could very easily be fixed with any form of critical proof-reading C) brah does it look like I give a damn about other people not knowing Deutsch? If you don't know that basic stuff you're either still in school or you should be.

how about i do a cinemasins parody for some lines as an example

"German vs Russian? This should be fantastic!" *ding!* Incorrectly assumed readers would find that at all relevant or appealing.

"I could get a better opponent rapping the damn St Bernard!" *ding!* ''Literally stole the concept from ERB. You can make a rap battle without ripping off ERB; however, you take the concept from ERB - you are ripping off ERB.''

"I know Cologne (Köln), you need it, plus you're not harmonious" *ding!* Beethoven reads editor's notes regaring how the line is disharmonious with itself.

theres three lines if you would rather I can go by a line by line review of the positive, negative and generally eh of the battle

Ohey so what you're saying is you could propose advice to help but you don't?

Yay! Congratulations on confessing to being an asshole.