User blog comment:Alexneushoorn/Epic Rap Battles of Savagery - Mario vs Sonic/@comment-27286780-20160809180413

There are lots of problems here, but It's your first battle so it's understandable. The flow was quite off at points. The rhymes were pretty meh. Some felt forced or didn't rhyme well. The amount of lines between was incredibly off tho. The lines were really generic, weren't needed or didn't make much sense, but the thunderhand line was alright. Overall it wasn't good, but I see chances of improvement.