Talk:Upcoming ERB suggestions/@comment-39140608-20190617173507/@comment-34363543-20190702132340

First off, no offense, but it's really rough writing. There aren't any IT references, it's got no flow, and Pennywise's rhyme scheme doesn't work. However, I know where you're coming from. I'm currently writing battles, and it's tough. Watch some ERB BTS and try to observe ERB's writing process.

One last tip: Put every bar on it's own line, like this:

"Jared Leto demolished the DCEU's hope

Guess you could say that's the real Killing Joke."

See how much easier it is to read?

Good luck in the future