User blog comment:Laboratory Tuxedo 500098/Welcome to The Madhouse-Chapter Two: Grounded/@comment-6682354-20141127012119

Don't have a paragraph have multiple people talking. Like, have one person talk per paragraph.

ie.

"Okay, patient #334.5682.0747626, what's your real name?" Teddy asked, still a bored man.

"Edd Elliott" she replied.

"What's your age?" Teddy asked.

"23 years old" Edd replied, sounding as bored as he was.

"Okay, Edd, now can you give me your favorite color?" Teddy asked.

"Uh, blue?" Edd answered, weirded out by the question.

"What is the airspeed velocity of a swallow?" Teddy questioned.

"European or African?" Edd replied, sarcastically.

"Correct, now leave." Teddy stated in a deadpan manner.

Obviously, it'll make you write a little more to make it look like there's more than just that, but I'm just giving constructive criticism.