User blog comment:Avatar XIII/Shovel Night vs Avatar XIII/@comment-24322797-20161125151043

"I’ll step on your head and stick your head in the dirt  " using head twice in one sentence doesnt sound good off the tongue. neither does reading "ERB of YouTube" but that's besides the point

it feels like shovel has a tendency to write lines that don't end with the same rhyme, so he forces rhymes onto the end of them in the most nonchalant way possible.

like for example

"I may be named shovel, but you’ve been in way more dirt than me

Two socks and then a fifteen month block in the same year, “B”"

this is a legitimately good line and set-up, except it abrubtly and randomly ends with "B." why. im sure thats a nickname or something but it doesnt matter it's totally forced in just to make the lines work

also, "I won’t lie, my first rap was indeed a GradeUnderF " don't do this. there is legitimately no reason to diss yourself and admit fault in a rap battle.

tldr avatar won