User blog comment:Hippie Rat/The Wiki-Wide Review - Hippie Rat Reviews/@comment-7464192-20170525202552

@El Alamein, thanks for the feedback. When I had written that it was essentially just to explain that certain words when thrown in will change the meaning of the line, as he had said "the kamikaze" rather than "kamikaze attacks" or something. It easily wasn't the best way to explain what I meant and was more nitpicky, and didn't even entirely fit in what that line was doing wrong and was more to just say that word choice needs to be carefully figured out when writing in general. I understand that kamikaze is seen by more people as the suicide attacks, and when he mentioned the kamikaze attacks the only thing that could be referencing was the movie Pearl Harbor, so if there really wasn't any kamikaze attacks at Pearl Harbor that's an error on the writer'a fault. Essentially the line was worded awkwardly