User blog comment:Icey778/Icey Rap Battles 3: Yang vs Derieri(Seven Deadly Sins)/@comment-3401602-20170728061405/@comment-25579736-20170728182721

Lame puns are not that hard to do.

That's probably the thing you're missing in order to break out and become amazing; personality quirks.

You've had some amazing lines, but both characters are often serious and trying to just insult each other in exactly the same way as each other.

(Though I'm not really one to talk about this. I will give a rapper their character quirks even if it hurts the quality of the rapping and disses. See Pokey vs Flowey. Half of Pokey's verses were immature bragging because that's his character, and half of Sans' were lame puns and not taking the battle seriously, because that's his personality. That's why Flowey and Giygas had the best lines.)