User blog:GMB13carat/So Much Creativity- An Original Rap by GMB13carat

Alright, I'm back. Is everything okay?

I just got a little bit I'd like to say

A PSA, if you will. So quickly take a chill

before reading. I don't mean at all to impede

on any opinions here- that's what I fear, as I

don't want to be too known all of the sudden. A dud

I do not wish to be. Are we ready? All right, one two three...

I look around and listen. The one thing that comes out is

all the well-known music is about is

violence and crime and parties and wine

and the other thing that I don't have to rhyme

all the songs are just "F this, F that!"

they think there's all these clever rhymes that they just spat

but it's always degrading to one race or another; they

objectify women and diss many others

why must this be what is being spit

if you're gonna offend so many, then you should just quit!

And I know that controversy is fuel, but no matter

how cool it is, sometimes it's just pointless!

Okay, let me try to formulate this idea

so it has "more complexity than a couch from IKEA "

You can choose to offend to no end, but you must

understand that what you're writing and the mic in your hand

are not meant to go together. There are many exceptions

but most of the popular stuff now is just excrement done

by millionares, who think it is perfectly fine

that "songs" about getting drunk outsell those of being kind

or of love, or of life, or raps about the strife of

living in a homeless shelter every night, the

rappers that make the pure crap on radio may have had

bad pasts, but the songs they craft are just bad...

Inspiration but

dilapidation and

we try to understand

the problem that's at hand.

Special thanks to dictionary.com.

P.S. Remember, this is all my opinion. I know there are strong exceptions. Please don't MEGA RAGE about it in the comments.

P.S.S. I have no problem with you disagreeing with me, however. :)

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