Talk:Frank Sinatra vs Freddie Mercury/@comment-174.17.32.84-20120825044429/@comment-4276072-20120830194604

while it does have the History part in there its not a rap. raps rhyme every line or every other line this has no rhymes in it whatsoever its Poetry except that it has to rhyme no matter what. for example "Four Score and 65 years in the PAST I won the Civil war with my Beard now I'm here to woop your ASS" see Past and Ass rhyme. you need to make it so that the lyrics rhyme with each other and also give it a beat/ rhythm because I am having difficulty trying to find one. other than that its actually really well done. just need to work on it a little more and make it rhyme and have a beat that it can follow.

sorry if I came across as rude that wasnt my intention.