User blog comment:0ShadowStories/ERBIdeas S5 - Ash Ketchum VS Charles Darwin/@comment-4984811-20150907214632

Gotta say, this is one of your better work. And ouch, Darwin's finisher xD

Just a little tip:

"I've been around the world, yet i've yet to see.

Just how stupid an old hack can truely be.

And you've got as many kids as a show on TLC!"



Don't have three rhyming lines, either add another one that rhymes with TLC or just stick with two. Trust me, it works waaaaaaay better.

And how about Naruto vs Luffy?