User blog comment:Fametown/Trevor, Michael, & Franklin vs The Three Musketeers/@comment-26494243-20150713053012

Alright, so I like the way most of this flows. You got that internal rhyme scheme at the beginning of both teams verses. That's especially fresh.

"Michael, the psycho, can't keep up with life's cycle

Rival to the trial, he's so homicidal"

I can hear that flow by reading it, and it sounds sick.

I want to know what your nationality is, or what your accent is cuz I'm really not feeling about half of these rhymes. Half were killer like Trevor-whatsoever or mess with-death wish. Half I couldn't tell how they'd rhyme pissed off-dick cums or mentors-together. Actually, it was less than half, but still enough to stick out.

The structure, maybe you should have spread them out more. Two long verses from each team could have been 4 shorter verses. This was a long one too.

The lyrics, I don't know much about any of these guys. I don't know if it's clever or not. I'd of put in a Kendrick Lamar reference for Lamar Davis. Idk why, I'm crazy about that guy.