User blog comment:Buu2099/Epic Rap Battles Of Fiction: John Cena Vs Hiroshi Tanahashi/@comment-27039431-20180830200951

This was REALLY good and impressive if you're so early into writing. Solid all throughout, never lazy, full of clever wordplays and metaphors. Seriously well done. Unfortunately the wiki is p dead right now so you will definitely be overlooked, but good luck

For criticism, obviously improve your format. No one really does the "two lines in ome" thing, but I can understand why you did it if you thought that your battle was too long and doing it in two lines will make it seem shorter, but just dont do that anymore.

There are also a lot of "Im so cool and I can spit" lines, especially without any kind of second layer of meaning put under it, so trim down those.

I am impressed by your talent and will follow your content in future. Wish the best for you.