User blog comment:DA151874/DA's Rap Battles Test Rap: MARIO VS FREDDY FAZBEAR/@comment-24310515-20150121221029

I like it, it has a very unique flow that I like but Ithink you should tweak with a bit, maybe make some lines a little bit longer?

Anyways, Freddie won. If you want to get better, I'd suuggest to keep writing battles.