User blog comment:Joshuakrasinski/Josh's rap battles the rock vs rocky balboa/@comment-4984811-20161028175537

Josh, please, try to listen:

First of, use more Caps please. For the names.

Second, I don't know how many times I have said this now but your line up of lines needs some serious work

Like:

" Look who's rising to the occasion with the People's Elbow

To leg drop harder than the bass on this autistic Dago

Just  bring it! I'll slog hits at you harder than Ivan or cancer

Because finally the Rock has come back to claim his mantle!"

This is what I pressume what you're trying to write? Well now this is way easier to read. Also, try to come up with more lines.