Talk:Nice Peter vs EpicLLOYD 2/@comment-27933547-20170608023922/@comment-25872721-20170608084123

Guess it's my turn.

I can see you improving to the point where you could be doing some high-quality stuff. Your anatomy and proportions, while not great, are much better than what I would've expected and the overall picture is okay, not too many things that are absolutely glaring. With that said, here are some things you should work on.

Noses are tough, but it should either be moved to the right or do the anime thing and remove the nostril.

Right leg isn't the same length as the other leg. It looks like it's tiptoed while the other is flat. I can tell it's not a perspective thing (Like Nightwing's leg is behind him like he's walking or something) because the calves are around the same size and shape and the red bands are in the same spot.

The red symbol on his chest is off. The bottom point should end in the middle of his abs, not to the left.

Dick looks dickless, try filling in a flat bit instead of making the space inbetween pointy.

The top of the ears are usually level with the eyes. Yours are level with the domino mask.

Where are his knees?

Left shoulder and pec look lumpy. Bring it in and smooth it out a bit.

I suggest either moving the face down or flattening his chin.

If you're looking for accuracy to the original, you've gone for more of a boomerang or kukri shape with the armblades while the original are straight.

Apart from a couple of minor gripes and the things mentioned by Gabriel, that's about it. I suggest doing a light rough sketch underneath to get anatomy and proportions right before outlining.