User blog:MrAwesome300/Adam vs. Eve Review. (ERB 28)



As soon as I got home from school, I got on YouTube and watched the new battle between Adam vs. Eve. Already disappointed with the lyrics and audio, I didn't expect the video to be any better. But it was! Like always, the cinematography was excellent and the look on Marbles' face at the end is priceless. But that doesn't account for the hideously bad pairup and writing. I believe that Jenna was one of the writers of this battle and maybe that's a part of why it was not good, but I actually blame this on Pete and Lloyd. Ever since Sinatra vs. Mercury, the writing's been off key from the first half of the second season. The pairup, suggested by two people, isn't good at all. I understand that this is kind of like a romantic episode in honor of Valentine's Day but it seems more like a mid-divorce fight rather than a rap battle. The ending is kinda stupid, but a little funny. The "Steve" character was unneeded and I still don't get who he is (if somebody knows, say in the comments). Not a terrible battle, but it's not good and I was highly disappointed by how it turned out. I don't expect the 29th battle to be any better. See you then and say in the comments what you thought.

What did you think of the battle? Pretty good! Terrible! Eh, okay. I'M GETTING UP TO THE POINT WHERE I MIGHT JUST GIVE UP ON ERB!!!