Talk:Epic Rap Battles of History 51/@comment-25628278-20141212062823/@comment-98.222.132.11-20141212072857

Maybe I'm just not hearing it, but it doesn't flow very well. There's way too much variety in terms of how long each line is. When you say it all out loud it's difficult to come up with a consistent beat.

Also there are a lot of "generic insult lines". Even the lines that talk about freezing stuff. It's just an ice themed way of saying "I'll beat you." It works maybe once or twice, but it gets old fast.

For character boasts, don't directly state "I can win". Talk about things that they've done, or abilities they have, give reasons. Similarly, for character insults, make the insults specific things that you couldn't do for someone else.