User blog comment:DennisRocking/SCRAPPED DRB: Dr. Jekkyl VS Dr. Frankenstein/@comment-3401602-20161031213212

it's jekyll smhhhhhhhhhh

I disagree with the majority of people saying this wasn't that good. I thought it was pretty nice, and it sounds like a typical ERB; some shorter lines that are a bit simple at times, but still some fun references thrown in.

For me, I'd say the weakest part was Dr. Jekyll's second half of his first verse:

"I'm a beast on the mic, don't be proud of your life!

You are no one to try to control death and life!

Frankenstein, you aren't frank in rhyme.

Best prepare to lose all your Hyde!

In this game, you're lame.

Tell it to your Hunchback of Notre Dame!

You caused pain, for shame!

Get outta' the way! I got a pimp cane!

I'm no longer tame!

So...just listen to the rain."

Referencing things like The Hunchback of Notre Dame is pretty nice, and even foreshadowing to Hyde's cane he beats with people was a nice touch, but a lot of this felt too simple or even filler. "In this game, you're lame / You caused pain, for shame / Get outta' the way / I'm no longer tame" could be worded a bit better, I'd say. A couplet with the word "life" being the final word in both lines can work in some instances, but it works best when the same word has two different meanings; here, it's the same meaning and just sounds repetitive.

All that being said, I absolutely loved Frankenstein's Monster's first verse. It was a pretty well done summary of the Monster's sorrow, and I think it was the best part of the battle.

Good job, Dennis. Happy Halloween.