User blog comment:Hippie Rat/The Phantom of the Opera vs The Joker/@comment-24845115-20150701020359

You chose the Jack Nicholson portrayl of the Joker, and you didn't reference "Have you ever danced with the Devil in the pale moonlight." Come on man.

Other than that, it was a good battle. The battle had a weird flow, like you were missing syllables and/or added way too many syllables. Some lines were really not needed, like the porn star line. It's assumed that the audience knows who you mean when you say you're beating Jack Napier. The porn star fact could've been work in later, maybe in the Harley Quinn line, or instead of the Marlyn Manson diss, you could've called him the whitest porn star or something.

You have too many jokes and disses to put into your lines, so you make the flow weird and the lines longer than they should be. I'd suggest working on either picking only the best jokes and disses and not trying to put in all the jokes you come up with, or you try to write lines that reference multiple jokes in the few words alloted. Maybe the porn star line could be "Harley has lost interest your diseased Mans-dick" It references the fact the Harley Quinn's interest in Joker, the fact that pornstars typically have an STD and the fact he looks like Marlyn Manson in that cover.

Your good lines were great. Joker's finishing line was hilarious. If you want to see how I wrote the Joker, take a look at my battle. I am in no means hating on you or your battles, I'm just pointing out what you could fix and how you can fix it. Have a nice day.