Thread:ProbablyNoah/@comment-26261279-20140407021626/@comment-26842383-20140407022935

Are we looking at the same battle? Because that was pretty dang good!

My only advice is when you use small words like "true grit" and "bring it" or "to me" and "mighty," try to make the words prior rhyme.

So for example, even though this wouldn't make sense, it'd be something like "True Grit" and "Blew It" or "Mighty" and "Smite Me"