User blog comment:Drakan95/Light Yagami vs Adolf Hitler. Epic Rap Battles: Cartoons vs History. Season 2 Finale/@comment-27039431-20180908125649

This was quite possibly one of the worst battles I have ever read on this wiki. Like holy shit this is awful. Every single line here was either a very lousy attempt at being clever or basically lazily saying the reference with no input or effort put into it. Its better then ERBP's Light vs L but that's like saying purgatory is better then hell.

"With a pen like one your country used to sign the Versailles treaty" - Yeah no. Just no. No. You are not being clever by saying this. You might as well say "I have a book like Mein Kempf". The problem with this line is that your reference is not the actual treaty and the damage it brought to Germany, but instead, that it was written with a pen. That someone used a fucking pen to write it. If you tried to say that Light will write destruction to Hitler then just like when his own country wrote the treaty then you did not say that at all. You said that he will write something just like some random treaty was written.

"You couldn't take your loss and decided to throw your own wedding, Then went to a bunker for the honeymoon so you can cry and hide But didn't bide the time and shot yourself after you took the cyanide " - You put no effort in this. Like zero. You just listed what happened. That bide/honeymoon/wedding thing is mildly clever, but it falls flat since its not the punch of this line. Your punch of this line is just reading a Wikipedia article. Bravo.

"You beefed with most countries despite being a vegetarian" - Look at this a beef vegetarian line. How original and creative. Same goes for that Jesse Owens line.

Those are pretty much three types of lines in this battle. Its either a 1: Trying to be clever but failing 2. Lousily saying what happened with no input 3. Doing the most basic and generic wordplay you can think of.

This whole battle.

The only decent lines I can think of are:

"Then leave you in a pool of your own blood, I know you're used to See Red" - Mildly clever but it would be better if you linked the blood to his eyes. Leaving someone in their pool of blood doesn't make their eyes see blood.

"Lenin's gonna make me another monument, when Light dies by my attacks" - Wow something unique and interesting. Let me explain why this line is good. You learn that Lenin built a monument for Robespierre. What you first think so is "I'm so dope that Lenin built me a monument" line. But you actually went a bit further and created a visual imagery of Robespierre with all the monuments he has of people he defeated, and how other people like Lenin look up for him for that.

"And speaking of your name, not even Liam Neeson got you an Oscar!" - See this is good. The line has two layers to it and both of them work. The only problem is that first bit of the line "and speaking of your name" is sitting here pretty awkwardly and does not make a lot of sense. Saying "despite your name" will fit the line much better.

More of the three lines. Thank you. Good luck on Season 3.