User blog comment:Dragonsblood23/The Battle Of A Devil & A Dragon Part 2/@comment-25051557-20130321222727/@comment-25051557-20130321223135

actually how old are you guys? You don't seem to err... educated in english. I'm guessing you guys are around 12? Yeah the flow was freaking awful for most of it. Not nearly enough words for each line to make it sound smooth. And half the things you said never made sence!