User blog comment:Dark Cyan/Cyan's Rap Battles of Literature 19: Michael Connelly vs John Connolly/@comment-4920659-20160204162713/@comment-4920659-20160204163949

lol yeah I just wanted to point out the activity because I don't think I've seen it happen so consecutively before d:

The battle is good, not your best as you stated, but I think there could have been more done in it. Like, googling "John Connolly" brings up something about a different guy with the name related to the FBI and crime, and I don't think that seemed to be mentioned in the battle, so that could have been done. I would say it needs more variety in material such as making more line related to the stories and other works involving them rather than their obscurity.