User blog comment:Icey778/Icey Rap Battles 3: Yang vs Derieri(Seven Deadly Sins)/@comment-3401602-20170728061405

You don't need Legion

This was really good, despite me not watching 7DS I thought all the verses were pretty fine. I think what you need to do most is fix up little minute things like grammar and punctuation in the lyrics.

I think I would have given Yang more pun-based lines considering that's a big schtick of hers, but yknow, it's a give or take.

Good job friendo