Talk:Epic Rap Battles of History 58/@comment-24408988-20151119020547/@comment-5482968-20151119024813

The first line is not bad, but could use reworking. The second would likely need major overhauling. The only reason it seems to be there is to have a rhyme, and the rhymes aren't supposed to be why you write a line. You write a rhyme to fit the line, not the other way around.