User blog comment:DennisRocking/Dennis' Rap Battles: 1, Prologue. Atilla VS Vlad./@comment-4490782-20160913174209

Wow, this was legit quite good. A lot more than I'd expect from a first battle certainly :)

I did pick up, however, on quite a few rhymes that I felt were stretching or misused. Falter/conquerer, pillage/commit, poet/omens sorta, topple you/Constantinople to you, missin' is/optimistic, fought in/losses, Orleans/me, world/warped, observation/vanished, scourge/score, serve ya/of 'em, specialty/Byzantines, challenge/savages, and boring/forest were the ones I picked up on. I'd say make sure to always rhyme the stressed syllables in a word as well as the end ones to make a solid rhyme.

But the disses and flow were lovely, this is a great start to your series and I hope to see more from you :)