User blog comment:Beerman8299/V vs. The Phantom of the Opera/@comment-3401602-20190830225546

This is really well written! Very intelligent lines that encapsulate the characters very well.

As for the rhyme schemes, I picked up on a couple inner rhymes that act as the foundation for a pretty interesting one. "Vicissitude led many to pay to see you"

You've got promising work here, no doubt about it. Great job!