User blog comment:Jella141/Parody 2: Teddyfail vs Loygansono55 (Ash vs Darwin)/@comment-6632076-20161119224118

Big tip of advice.

For parodies, it's extremely important to keep the syllables in the lines the same or nearly the same, not doing so either makes it sound awkward or makes it so the reader has to read the rap faster than its supposed to be.

One example being "Meh, it's my lucky day, I've always wanted to shit on a Crat" which has 16 syllables when the original line has 12. Going from let's say 12 to 13 or even down to 11 is fine, but it's always something you gotta look out for for it to truly match the battle and become a parody.

Overall nice battle, kinda hope we can work together one day ^_^