User blog comment:Icey778/Iamthelegion vs Icey778/@comment-25907157-20160815233011/@comment-25907157-20160818164806

Ok, detailed review time. I want to start off with what you two did well. Both of you stayed in character. It wasn't hard to sense that both of these verses came from their respective writers. The flow was rather nice. Formatting was also good. So overall, it's a visually appealing battle.

Some things that can be improved for you are grammar and triplet rhyming, because receded and erased do not rhyme. For Legion, using Iamthe twice lessened it's significance. Plus, hence and "into it" don't really rhyme either. Also, a few lines make little sense.

Overall, a fun battle. I think you two did well. I vote for Legion.