User blog:Queen Desi/Harley Quinn vs Alice

This is my first rap battle. I'm new to this, so it won't be great. But I'd love some constructive criticism or feedback. ( It's pretty long) Okay here it is:

HARLET QUINN!

VS

ALICE!

Harley Quinn:

I am Harley Quinn, evil with my puddin'

You dress like a slutty maid, when you really shouldn't.

I wear a jester's suit that shows my figure.

You think you're so cool? I'm badder and bigger.

It's amazing how you think you're more insane than me.

People forget about you, you live in infamy.

I get to fight batman and super heroes all day.

If the Queen of Hearts wants to fight, you run away.

I know I'm older and you're still a child.

I mean, you're too scared to even try to reconcile.

With everybody that hates you, it's a long grocery list.

Like your croquet skills, you'll shoot at me and miss.

Alice:

Can you stop talking? You're voice is giving me a headache.

You cry so much over your abuser, cry me a lake.

I'd say river, but JT copyrighted that song.

At least I don't sing every single key wrong.

"Mr. J" doesn't love you, get a clue!

When you're weak, he'll pick you up and snap you in two.

You're delirious if you think he loves you.

He wanted to replace, when he had enough of you.

Harley Quinn:

My friends are full of crooks and criminals.

The amount of friends you have is the minimal.

Everybody chased you when you couldn't run.

I get away and escape after having my fun.

Alice:

You say you're so known, you don't have your own film.

I have tons, I can't even count all of them.

Even Catwoman has movies about her story.

You're sure to be in batman's background, don't worry.

You have stockholm syndrome, good you got hit.

Used to be a psychiatrist? Nobody believes it.

Harley Quinn:

All I can say, is you're right.

I DID become insane out of spite.

But guess what? I make it seem hot.

You're so damn loony, because of that drug you've got.

So high, you have trouble thinking

Like the titanic, your argument is sinking.

You drink anything that says "drink me."

If the hatter gives you tea, it's gonna get kinky.

Alice:

Look, I haven't got time to fight you slut.

If I were you I'd hide and keep my mouth shut.

How you are and how you obsess is stalkery.

You better leave, before I turn hostile like the jabawaukee.

Who won?

(Again sorry if it's bad. I tried <3)