User blog:Joeaikman/Wiki Note Chapter 1 - Mind's Discovery

''*We open up on a boy sat at the dinner table of his house. He is unwrapping presents furiously*''

Boy: Thanks mom! This is great!

Mom: It's no problem, Mind. Anything for my little boy.

Mind: What's next? Oooh this one!

*Mind picks up a small rectangular present*

Dad: I hope you like this one, son

''*Mind unwraps it quickly. It's an old notebook*''

Mind: Cool! What is it?

Dad: I found it in a small souvenir shop. The owner said it was an ancient Japanese trinket

Mind: That sounds awesome!

Dad: You can use it to write your thank yous in

Mind: I sure will! Thanks guys!

*Gives each of his parents a hug before running upstairs to his room*

Mind: This notebook looks old....I wonder how Andrew is!

*Throws the notebook on the bed before running over to his laptop and putting up a skype call*

Mind: Hey Andrew!

Andrew: Hey Mind. Happy birthday, mate

Mind: Thanks! We still on for after school?

Andrew: Of course, bro, I have a great afternoon planned. Do you mind if Gizmo and Kari come?

Mind: Of course not! The more the merrier

Andrew: I'll talk to you later, mate, got to get ready for school

Mind: Bye!

''*Mind closes his laptop and picks up the notebook again. He frowns as he sees that it is used*''

Mind: What's this?

''*He opens the notebook. It is empty except for small ticket to a local circus for tomorrow*''

Mind: Awesome, Dad must have put this in here to surprise me!

*Mind places the ticket on his desk before putting on his tie and running off to school*

-

*Mind is sat with three other people outside eating lunch, one of them is Andrew*

Mind: Does anyone have a fork? My mom forgot to pack me one

Andrew: I already used mine, sorry

Boy: Just use your fingers, Mind

Girl: Gross, Gizmo

*The group laughs*

Gizmo: It's not that bad, Kari

Mind: You guys make me laugh!

*At that moment a group of four walks across to them*

Boy 1: Hehe, look, if it isn't the dork brigade

Girl 1: Lay off them, Joe

Joe: You standing up for them, Nail?

Nail: N-no

Joe: Good. Hey Mind, I hear it's your birthday today

Mind: Yeah. It is.

Joe: I'd wish you a happy birthday but I hope it sucks

Boy 2: You tell him, Joe

Andrew: Just push off, Joe

Joe: What was that, Andrew? I'd watch your manners, we wouldn't want any more science accidents would we?

Andrew: ...

Boy 3: haha, good one

*Gizmo stands up*

Gizmo: Just leave them alone!

Joe: Or what? You'll tell daddy?

*Gizmo blushes*

Joe: Face it, you three are losers, I honestly don't know why someone as attractive as Kari would sit with you over me

Kari: Because I tried sitting with you and didn't like the smell

Andrew: Owned

Boy 2: No-one talks like that to Joe...

Joe: Leave it, Sceptile, they'll get what's coming to them in due time

Sceptile: If you say so

Joe: I do. I have important business to see to, I'll be seeing you punks later, however

''*Joe, Sceptile and the other boy walk off laughing. Nail looks back at Mind's group apologetically*''

Gizmo: Way to show him up, Kari!

Kari: It's easy, I just wish he wasn't so mean to you three

Andrew: It's fine, he's just a bully

Kari: It makes me sick how those two back him up

Mind: Nail's alright though...

Andrew: It's a shame she's always with Joe

Gizmo: Guys, look at the time! Me and Andrew need to be off or we will be late for Further Math

Andrew: Shit, you're right

''*Gizmo and Andrew get up and run off. Kari smiles up at Mind*''

Kari: I have something for you

Mind: Really?

Kari: Yeah. I couldn't give it to you before because they were here

*Kari moves up to kiss Mind when suddenly a water bomb drops on his head*

Sceptile: You got him!

Boy 3: Haha

Nail: Guys...

Sceptile: That was such an awesome shot

Joe: I know right! See ya around, guys!

*Joe walks over to Mind and Kari*

Joe: Come on, baby. We have a business class to get to

*Picks Kari up against her will and carries her away from Mind*

Mind: Bye

-

''*Scene opens on Mind the next day at the circus! he's with Andrew*''

Mind: Can't believe you have a ticket too

Andrew: My dad got it with the raffle at work, when he heard you were coming he said I could have it

Mind: That's awesome

Andrew: Wanna go to the puppet show first?

Mind: Let me get some candy floss first

Andrew: Alright, if you get me some then I'll get our place in the queue

Mind: Deal!

''*The two separate and Mind heads to the candy floss machine. The guy behind it is wearing a long black cloak and a plain white mask*''

Mind: Two cotton candies please!

Salesman: Coming right up

*The salesman gets Mind the treats and Mind pays*

Salesman: I hope I see you again soon, young man

Mind: Thanks! Bye

''*Mind runs off from the salesman and finds Andrew at the front of the queue

Andrew: Awesome, we are about to get in

*Suddenly a familiar voice pipes up next to them*

Nail: Hey Mind, hey Andrew!

Andrew: Oh hey Nail. Where's Joe?

Nail: Him, Sceptile and Bob are on the rollercoaster, gives me about 20 minutes with nothing to do

Andrew: That's cool

Mind: Would you like to come watch this with us?

Nail: Really? You'd let me? Even after how much of a jerk my brother is to you?

Mind: Of course. He's not you after all

Nail: And you Andrew?

Andrew: Sure, might be fun to have some more company

Nail: Then yes, Mind. I would love to join you

Mind: stay with Andrew then, I'll go get you some cotton candy

Nail: Thanks Mind!

*Mind runs off towards the stall he had been at before*

Mind: That's odd...I could swear it was right here

*Mind walks over to the nearest staff member*

Mind: Can you tell me where the guy selling cotton candy went?

Man: I'm sorry kiddo, we don't sell cotton candy here

Mind: But I swear there was a guy right there...

Man: You must be seeing things...

Mind: Hmmmm...thanks anyway

*Mind walks away from the guy, looking puzzled and back towards his friends*

Mind: Sorry Nail, they were out and the guy had left to get some more. You can share mine if you like

Nail: I'd like that

*Nail smiles at Mind as the trio are let in*

-

''*The show is nearing an end. Mind is sat in between Nail and Andrew*''

Mind: This was great! I'm so glad my dad got that ticket

Andrew: Oh god! Look at the time! I have a history paper due in tomorrow, sorry Mind, I gotta go

Mind: See you later, Andy

Nail: Bye

*Andrew leaves the group and a few minutes later Nail and Mind leave as well*

Nail: Can you come with me a minute? There's something I want to show you

Mind: Sure

''*Nail guides Mind around to the back of the tent. It is darker here*''

Nail: Thanks for a wonderful evening...

Mind: It's nothing, I'm glad you had fun

Nail: I did

*Nail leans up and kisses Mind*

Mind: ....

*Mind kisses back*

???: WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS???

*Joe pushes Mind to the floor*

Joe: I will actually kill you

Nail: Joe please don't

Joe: How DARE you touch my sister

Mind: Ow

Joe: You think you're in pain now

*A man comes around the corner*

Man: Is everything alright, Joe?

Joe: Dad...everything's fine

Man: Glad to hear it, come on you two, we need to be off

Joe: Good

*Joe storms off and Nail pulls Mind to his feet*

Nail: Sorry

Mind: Don't be!

Nail: Good night, Mind

*Nail leans up and kisses Mind quickly before skipping off*

-

''*The next day Andrew, Kari and Gizmo are sat at a bench outside. Joe is sat on the opposite side of the playground with his usual gang. Nail looks like she has a black eye*''

Gizmo: I wonder what happened to Nail

Andrew: She seemed alright yesterday, she must have been hurt since then

Gizmo: Joe looks really angry

Kari: Joy...another day of you getting picked on and him flirting with me

*Mind walks over to them*

Mind: What's up, my homies?

Andrew: Never call us that again

Mind: Sorry

Gizmo: We were just discussing how beaten up Nail looks

Mind: I saw her earlier, apparently Joe did it

Andrew: Really?

Mind: That's what I heard

Gizmo: Wow

Mind: Hey guys, something weird happened this morning

Kari: What is it?

Mind: You know I found the ticket for the circus in that notebook my dad gave me? Well I found something else. Here, Andrew, read it out loud

Andrew: It says that Mind should meet whoever wrote this in the abandoned car park during lunch hour

Kari: That's now...

Mind: I was just heading off, I wanted to know if any of you want to come

Kari: No thanks, that place creeps me out

Andrew: Count me out. I have to do some science catchup with Sceptile

Gizmo: I'll come with you, Mind

Mind: Thanks Gizmo, we better get off now then. See you two later

*Gizmo gets up and walks off with Mind*

-

Gizmo: There's no one here, Mind

Mind: What are you talking about, Gizmo, there's a guy right over there

Gizmo: There isn't though, you're seeing things

Mind: If you're going to be irritating then stay here and keep watch

Gizmo: Fine

*Mind walks over to the figure*

Mind: Wait! I know you! You're the Cotton Candy guy from yesterday

Man: Indeed, but my actual name is Dark

Mind: How come you vanished yesterday?

Dark: I'd already given you what you needed

Mind: The note…

Dark: Indeed Mind…you already hold the power…you just need to realise it…

Mind: What do you mean?

Dark: The notebook your father gave you offers a great power

Mind: I think you're mistaken, it's just an ordinary notebook

Dark: Just an ordinary notebook? No! That is a Death Note. It gives you the power to kill whoever you want just by writing their name down

Mind: That's horrible…

Dark: Maybe to some…but you could do so much good with it

Mind: What do you mean?

Dark: Think of all the people you could enact revenge on for the sins they have committed…murderers….rapists….teenage boys who fap to porn…you can be god

Mind: I don't know…

Dark: Why do these people deserve to live? They are nothing. You can save them from their lives of sin

''*Suddenly a TV appears. The local anchorman, Shark, is talking*''

Shark: And the latest news is that notorious gang leader LakuitaBro is currently involved in a gun fight with 4 police officers downtown!

*Footage of the gunfight is shown*

Dark: You can stop this

Mind: I can…

Dark: Will you?

Mind: ….yes

''*Mind pulls out the notebook and writes down LakuitaBro. The gunfight goes on for another 30 seconds when suddenly…*''

Lak: Argh

*Lak stumbles out from behind an overturned car and collapses*

Dark: Well done!

Mind: I…I killed him…

*The screen goes black, Shark can still be heard*

Shark: LakuitaBro appears to have suffered a heart attack…LakuitaBro is dead, repeat, LakuitaBro is dead!