User blog comment:DudeWithASuit/Scrawland Scribblescratch vs Gordon Freeman. Dwassy G's Underground Rap Battles/@comment-24993461-20150307044449

Not bad. I'd suggest working on stronger punchlines. You built up pretty well here:

''I'm a man of few words, but I have to get this off my chest.

That verse was pretty bad, mediocre, at best.

You say you're so great, but I must beg your pardon.''

It didn't lead to anything special in my opinion.

Good work though.