User blog comment:CaveJohnson333/Jack's Rap Battles: Michael Bolton vs. Troy Bolton/@comment-24993461-20150214050549

You did your research and included references, but did nothing with them.

"Had a scholarship opportunity, but chose not to chase it"

This is okay, but it isn't a strong dis. It's stating facts. Nobody will be impressed by that line. Make it clever; there are many different ways you could have worded that line.

Since you're good at being insulting I'm sure that won't be much of a challenge. ;)