User blog comment:Gliscor Fan/Rap Battles of Gliscors Universe 10 Season Finale: Flame Princess vs Johnny Storm/@comment-24993461-20150103033412

You need some work on your flow. The best place to start would to work on rhyming in more than just the last one or two syllables of every line. This is a technique called internal writing.

"Soon you will be destroyed by the very name that you coined!" Is a great start. It could flow better though. Making a line symmetrical or even close can help a ton.

Soon (1) you (2) will (3) be (4) de- (5) --- stroyed (6). There are five syllables leading up to the rhyming syllable (the "oi" sound). This means that five syllables should lead up to the word "coined".

By (1) the (2) ve- (3) ry (4) name (5) that (6) you (7) --- coined (8)

This is sevensyllables. It's not wrong as it is, but it can be improved. Depending on the beat you are writing to, the next step can vary. I personally think that adding syllables to the first half of the line would make it flow better. An example would be:

"Soon you're going to get destroyed (8) by the very name that you coined! (8)"

In the end, it's all up to you. With good flow, the line can work either way but I think it sounds better with symmetrical syllables.

All that aside, good work on your finale.