User blog comment:Gliscor Fan/Epic Rap Battles: Pokemon vs History. Lopunny vs Jessica Rabbit/@comment-24993461-20150319045506

Different from what everybody below is saying, I don't think this battle isn't great. You and I make similar mistakes while writing. I come up with line ideas that I like and they sound really good in the moment but they're actually meh in hindsight. Here are some particularly weak lines:

"I got a 50% chance to be male, but always seen as a chick"  I don't see how this line is relevant. It's not a dis and it seems like an odd thing to brag about. If it were reworded, the material could fit somewhere.

"Who framed Roger Rabbit? I’ll solve that mystery with a Jump Kick"  This line is confusing. It doesn't connect to the previous line at all, nor does it make sense on its own.

"Two girl rabbits rapping it out? This isn’t news to my ears" This may be a reference to something, I don't know and it doesn't matter. The literal meaning of this line is how he is used to hearing girl rabbits rapping. It's filler. Asking questions in rap battles also rarely works unless it builds up to a punchline, such as in the opening lines of the Ghostbusters (I even think that was executed poorly).

''"You’re immune to ghost, but not immune to stupid rhymes?" ''This line is also worded poorly. Interpreting this literally, I could say he is calling his own rhymes stupid. Also, another question line.

I hope this helps.