User blog comment:Kungfuguy27/Brandon Service DF vs Kungfuguy27 - Fifth Official Wiki Rap Tournament - Round 2/@comment-5482968-20160826221600

Half-and-half, fittingly for a duo.

Parts of this I really liked. Parts annoyed me.

I really liked Kung's first verse. It started off kind of slow-ish, but it built up really well. The Step line in particular is funny

...but then rhyming navy with avvy at the end killed all of that. RIP.

Bran fires back pretty decently, and then that awkward line break trips things up again.

I don't have much to say about the back half because those things I mentioned already take up most of my mind-room for this battle, but I will mention that

"My raps stay hard, but my dick is starting to soften!"

feels like something Grav or Barry would write as like a joke or something. You followed through with the next line and all, but I still couldn't shake it.

This is a very long post.

I will make it longer.

I vote Kung since in the end I still liked his first verse best of all. GG Bran.

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