User blog comment:Joshuakrasinski/josh's rap battles frank west vs ash williams/@comment-29389164-20160709044145

Josh, to be blunt, this sucks, and you regressed, which is a shame because you were improving on some of your recent battles. Your formatting, a recurring issue, once again needs work. It's very difficult to tell where the lines end until the last verse. There is waaaaay too much filler, and on top of all that, many lines just don't rhyme. I get that not everyone here is an amazing rapper and all that, but there comes a time where you just have to evaluate what your doing and make a change for the better. At this point, I think that you're either ignoring all critcism, or just blissfully unaware of how mediocre your battles are.

Don't get me wrong, I want to see you improve, because it's fun when everyone has a good series to share with their peers. But it takes work. I hope you're willing to put the necessary effort into it.