User blog:ClockworkFirefly/The Winds of the Waking Forest

This was just a random poem I wrote for Poetry class and I was wondering what y'all would think of it.



The Winds of the Waking Forest by ClockworkFirefly





The trees were standing silent and still



No man or spirit can dominate their will

The ponds were blue like the morning sky

It was enough to make the strongest man cry

The red leaves were lying low on the land

Although the winds themselves were wonderfully grand

They whistled and ruffled through the leaves and trees

You could also feel the nice cool breeze

The winds always felt like bliss on my skin

It felt so good it could almost be a sin

<p class="MsoNormal">The winds always went from west to east 

<p class="MsoNormal">They could even tame the wildest beast

<p class="MsoNormal">My heart remains however sad and gloomy

<p class="MsoNormal">For the winds are gone to make the parking lot more roomy.