User blog comment:FrankieRapBattles/Western Philosophers vs. Eastern Philosophers (Remake)/@comment-4998540-20150720040302

I'll try and give helpful criticism here:

Overall, this needs a lot of work if you want to consider it your own.
 * For one, the two additional people you threw in are uncecessary. Plato and Aristotle wouldn't argue with Socrates most likely. Also, Buddha didn't say anything except for being given lines from other philosophers. At least give them more than that.
 * Almost all of the lines are either exactly the same, or crammed so the new rappers have a line. Take "Laozi, kick the beat; Buddha, make some noise; now Confucius, drop some bars! " for example. Also, many of the lines towards/by Aristotle/Plato still use Voltaire's words. Enlightenment, free speech, coffee, the lottery, and the whole Frank couplet have material specific to Voltaire. The least you could've done is change that bit to something like "Aristotle's gonna throttle you toddlers!" or whatever.
 * What new lines there are are short and dull.