User blog comment:Hippie Rat/Max Caulfield vs Donnie Darko/@comment-24322797-20160705190214/@comment-7464192-20160705191646

Yeah I took a large step away from the character on the avenge Chloe ending and I wanted to give Frank and Donnie some remorse after basically making them the "antagonists" of this battle, but that was just it, the reader is controlling Max, that basically puts Frank and Donnie in the place of antagonist for the reader. So yeah I had the same problems with this while writing it but I just wasn't finding the right way around those while still making the story comprehensible. Either way, thank you for reading and thank you for the feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed