Talk:Epic Rap Battles of History 52/@comment-7367734-20150202080132

Hey guys, I'm working on a rap battle (still, I took a break, okay?) between Atticus Finch and Phoenix Wright and I thought of a few lines for Phoenix, and was hoping for feedback, tips and any constructive criticism :) thanks!

 Phoenix Wright:

"Objection! Your Honour, this man's a contradiction,

Trynna step to me to claim that he's the greater work of fiction!

The defense presents the evidence to show this guy's the worst of parents,

Who can't control his kids when they go jumping the neighbour's fence!

These aren't your Day of Glory, you're the lowest of the Pecking order,

You're trying to make a son out of your precious Jem of a daughter!"