User blog comment:Joeaikman/Joe's Poetry Slam Entry Round 2 - A Rwby Rap/@comment-3401602-20151107004158

lmao

I read this in the voice of Dan Bull, sounded kinda like one of his raps

Rhyme schemes and flow are good and all but it seems to lack actual concise meaning and depth and such that poems are typically composed of

Idk

6/10