User blog comment:Alexneushoorn/Epic Rap Battles of Savagery - Mario vs Sonic/@comment-15589301-20160809172551

I think even for a first attempt, this was kind of slacking to be honest. Generally, I just don't think it was well written, and it seems pretty lazy; especially in the rhyming scheme (i.e chuckles with knuckles, sonic's introduction to Tails which was basically a rip off from Vader and Boba Fett)

So yh, try and spend more time on stuff like that, if you want to improve, which I assume you will want to if you are going to be posting more. As well was the rhymes, I think overall lines need to have more substance as well, because a lot of them are barely disses at all (how is Sonic not having a lot of sports games a diss?)