User blog comment:JakeTheManiac/JakeTheManiac vs Dragonsblood23. Seventh Official Wiki Rap Tournament Round Two/@comment-5412428-20180810045618

First off, kudos for the severe lack of links

First halfy, I went into this expecting Jake to dominate and while I love you both, there can only be one winner

Secondly, I wasn't the biggest fan of Jake's first verse, I felt you were just stating stuff that didn't really connect to stuff you were saying, like the "joined as a joke" line. Ye Dragon joined as a joke how are you going to twist that into a legitimately hard hitting diss? Your final bar felt like it was taken out of a Mat4yo video.

Thirdly, Dragon's first verse was a bit bland as well, wasting three lines talking about how slow Jake was at writing, but at least he formed his lines into legitimate disses.

Fourthly, Jake steps up in his second verse with his first four lines, but after that it's like you're dancing away from actually touching Dragon. Ye you say stuff about him but it seems like your punchlines are deviating further and further away from Dragon himself, as highlighted by your final line, which is admittedly brutal but still. Ye Dragon likes Robbie Rotten and ye what happened to the actor was a tragedy, but I honestly felt like your verses could have benefitted from a lot more creativity. I enjoyed the Sesame Street bar tho.

Fifthly, same goes to Dragon about the creativity and occassionally deviating away from Jake, but his final line, while certainly not the strongest bar in the battle, definitely connected more than Jake's, at least for me.

Sixthly, it is Dragon who I vote to advance in the Seventhly Tourney

Sorry Jake :(