User blog comment:Drakan95/Epic Rap Battles of History : Harry and Marv VS Wario and Waluigi/@comment-2165715-20150408163541/@comment-2165715-20150411152245

I'm sorry if you felt offended by it, I admit I worded that too aggressively :/

I didn't say your lines were awful, I said that the battle didn't live up to my expectations, cause from what I've seen it's a popular series

Basically, I feel that a lot of what they say is filler or irrelevant : for example, they reference Super Smash Bros for no particular reason (and Super Smash puns are getting really lame, but that's just not towards this battle I'm pointing at), then they threaten Wario, which indicates that they'll leave Waluigi alone for some reason. I get what you meant by this line, but it could have been thrown in better: like "when we're done, no way to differentiate the two" or something like that.

Then goes a line when they say they're lamer than Yoshi, but I don't recall Yoshi being a lame character at all, I don't even think I ever saw anyone on the net hating on Yoshi's character (I could be wrong tho). Then they say "I mean let's be honest that's the truth", which, unless it's a quote from the movie (which I haven't seen), is a filler line.

I could go on, but I think it wouldn't be a good idea because I think I would sound too cocky and mean-spirited. However, as I said, this wasn't a bad battle, it just needs improvement. Maybe I am being too attached to "my" way of making battles, but I am just trying to give constructive criticism, which might not be really welcomed if I phrase it wrong.

So sorry about that first message looking "offensive"