User blog comment:GravityMan/Literature vs History 12: Yertle the Turtle vs Adolf Hitler/@comment-25363318-20160426181134/@comment-5412428-20160426181701

Thanks for the feedback GIR :D

Yertle doesn't have a lot of information for me to use to be honest. I tried to mention Mack and whatnot and I had a few lines talking about the Moon and Yertle's pile but it came off as awkward for Hitler or Yertle to talk about so I scrapped them. As for the flow, I tried to base Hitler's verses off the same flow he went off on in some of his speeches and I was trying to mimic his speeches diss wise as well, where he'd talk about vague concepts to give the audience the general idea of his power instead of going fully in depth. I'm aware sometimes he did, but I honestly felt he was really vague in his speeches and decided to make him more flow based instead to try to keep him true to his character. I just want to point out btw, the first submarine was called the Turtle, that's why Hitler said his U-Boat left him obsolete. But ye, I'll try to be more detailed next time.