User blog comment:LawnDefender072003/Sun Wukong vs Superman/@comment-24322797-20170623143745

"So come on, try again to diss the Man of Steel (yeah!)"

"I'm a real hero! I help townsfolks wherever I go! (Fuck!)"

"That turtle dropped your ass down the river! (dang!)"

these three lines have something in common in that both parts of the couplet worked separately, but you tried to combine them in ways that didn't make sense. Instead of randomly adding "Fuck!" after "I help townsfolks wherever I go!," just find a different bar that ends with a word that rhymes with "up" or word it differently. otherwise it just seems forced, and in all honesty, a bit silly

otherwise you've got the proper tools here to make some good content so keep it up

also most everyone here knows sun wukong so dont worry about that lol