User blog comment:Joeaikman/Wiki Note Chapter 1 - Mind's Discovery/@comment-3051496-20150317182413

Hrm, yes.

Everyone is wet for Mind tho XD

I like how you are using lesser known (no offense) users with these earlier parts. Instead of busting out "DWAZ KEELZ EVR1 WIT DA DED NOT"

The inside jokes are funny, but, I think Mind won't be all happeh to see at least one.

Pacing's pretty good. Maybe a little more backstory.

Kewl. Keep it up.