User blog comment:Avatar XIII/DCRB 10 Season One Finale: Batman vs Alucard/@comment-3051496-20160901005016/@comment-3051496-20160901005714

Tbf, I'm not reading it with the beat, so idk if that is going to help in anyway in terms of flow. But I still think it stands that your lines are pretty long. You keep trying to shove a lengthy reference or thought into a single line, and it just doesn't work half of the time.