User blog comment:Icey778/Rap Battles of Excellence Redux 19: Light Yagami vs Devil's Diary/@comment-25070213-20170712164334/@comment-25070213-20170712165523

You had 2 lines referencing L in the exact same way as a pun on the whole W for Win, L for Loss rap lingo which were:

Rejected the W from the L, thought you'd stay undetected

But give me the M I C and I give second L the L 

I really don't think that a reference used in the same way by 2 different people should be a thing. Sure if was phrased differently but it more or less plays off of that logic and it gets repetitive. For something that can be poked fun of is something more vast than that rap lingo alone such as say, the interactions between Light and L. You have more variety lines from the awkward encounters all the way to Rule 34. Basically if you have to reference something or somebody more than once, make sure you can do it with a different context or point to avoid redundancy.

Also, Legion, please explain the line because I really want to understand xD