User blog comment:Joeaikman/Joe's Battle of Fiction number 2 - Katniss Everdeen vs Harry Potter/@comment-24993461-20140614033409

It seems like you just stuck the references in the verses; I don't think you were as creative as you could have been.

"I'M NOT JEALOUS!!! Ginny is Ron's sister" This line fails as a rebuttal. It feels like Harry is yelling, and trying to deny his jealous feelings, at least that's how I perceived it. Also, using one whole bar to claim "I'm going to win" or "I'll beat you" without adding anything extra to it makes the line fail. For example, in ERB's Columbus vs. Kirk, "I'll beat you so bad, they'll feel it in the next Generation" is a clever play on words by Columbus regarding Star Trek. "Because Harry potter is the only one who's going to win this bout" Is a dull line.

If you have anything extra you want me to explain, let me know, because I don't feel like I covered enough, and it's bugging me. Anyway, by fan-made battle standards, I'd give this a 5.5/10.