User blog comment:Icey778/Rap Battles of Excellence Redux 16: Alice Kingsleigh vs Dorothy Gale/@comment-9623756-20170107141248

This is the best battle you've released recently. Yes, the lines are long, but the rhyme schemes helped to compensate for that. However, most of the rhyme schemes weren't trmendously relevant to the characters, and in places you used words that made littl sense.

As Night said, you are getting to a middle ground, but I would encourage you to do more in the way of obvious references, but again, this was an improvement on that regard too.

Good job, Icey.