User blog comment:JKGame/Jesse vs Quibble Pants: My Little Rap Battles Season 2/@comment-27039431-20190706084131

Honestly most of the time I dont pay that much attention to rhyming but dear gods I can count things that actually rhymed on my hands. If the next battle is a big one, dont make the same mistake you did with this and instead polish every line to make sure it is the best you could bring (as there are also some grammar errors there, suggesting you didn't even properly proofread).

The lines themselves were ok but nothing spectacular either. So ye, dont rush out stuff, take it at your own pace to make sure its good.