Talk:Epic Rap Battles of History 46/@comment-5585392-20140929200939/@comment-98.222.132.11-20140929210606

There are a lot of pretty bad grammatical errors, but ignoring those your lyrics still have a lot of problems. Notably your lines vary in length way too much. For instance

"Look what we have here You said it discovered a new land,seriously,please disappear"

5 syllables vs 17 syllables. How exactly are you expecting this to be rapped? Rhyming lines need to have the same number of syllables, I can't stress this enough.

There are too many generic lines. "Your rhymes are weak," "your ugly face," "everyone know who won," "Your rhymes are a shit." One or two of these lines are okay, but there's barely any actual references. And most of the references aren't even clever just stuff like yeah you're from the US, or hey I went to space.

Overall, I didn't get the feeling that you put any effort into this at all.