User blog comment:FrankieRapBattles/Will Smith vs. Eddie Murphy/@comment-9623756-20150328081553

This was an improvement but there's still some grammatical errors and lines seem immature and weak in places

"You being the best actor? Nobody can't Imagine That"

That's a compliment. It should read Nobody can Imagine That to be an insult

You used Bestest a couple of times which is icky

But ye was better than before