Talk:Frank Sinatra vs Freddie Mercury/@comment-2049739-20120708090603/@comment-97.102.131.191-20120708121903

Darwins thing was good, i wish he would talk a bit more about himself and use more words from the period. Ash's part wasn't as good. The first line didn't even rhyme, and the rest were weak rhymes, like you chose two rhyming words than placed words infront. Maybe focus less on the Pokemon and more on thier evolution, or Darwin's theory of evolution. But besides those points, i think it was a good rap in all!