User blog comment:DennisRocking/Dennis' Rap Battles: 1, Prologue. Atilla VS Vlad./@comment-25763997-20160913190609

Yeah this is great, as people have said, work on the rhymes. Also, try to make the battles more paced, this one started great but stretched out. I don't have a problem with long battles, this one just didn't have twists like a change of style or rebuttals or anything.