Talk:Epic Rap Battles of History 58/@comment-108.210.86.239-20151004220515/@comment-4872155-20151005115210

It could be worded a bit better so he's not just saying "So shut the fuck up dude!" as lines like this tend to sound like filler and often ruin the jokes you are trying to make, at least from my perspective. Other than that, the premise of the whole line is kewl. :)