User blog comment:Joshuakrasinski/josh's rap battles joker vs sweet tooth/@comment-3401602-20160617041906

Well a few things on my mind:

Format needs to be cleaned up. As it is, every verse reads in just one long run-on sentence. Each line of the verse should be separated by a new line in spacing. I say this because the current format makes it hard to tell when a line ends and a new one begins. I'd also recommend cleaning up grammar and stuff like that; punctuation and capitalization specifically.

Some of the lines felt a little vague or random, as well. "you got a purple suit well explain why a toy where your suit is green and not mention, you pajama pants why are they black?" and "call me freddy krueger cause your dreams i will haunt" just didn't really make sense to me.

I also didn't really understand Krusty's inclusion because I figured the battle's match-up was "insane clowns", and not just "clowns". But alright, it was a pretty funny way to end the battle.